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Relic of the Coiled Dominion

An Ode to Humanity's Last Relic

Tim MargettsJune 30, 202619 views
Relic of the Coiled Dominion

O hallowed relic, wrought of tempered grace,
What nameless artisan first bent thy form
Into this twice-returning, silver hymn?
Five thousand circlings of the patient sun
Have failed to dull thy strangely measured curves,
Nor rust erase the wisdom of thy shape.

From shattered vaults beneath forgotten towers
We drew thee, wrapped in powdered centuries,
Where all around lay tablets void of speech,
Their silent leaves surrendered unto dust,
Yet thou endured, inviolate and whole,
As though preserving mysteries within.

Surely no ornament wert thou alone.
Too stern for beauty's idle vanities,
Too plain for crowns, too perfect for mere trade.
Some holier purpose dwelt within thy frame,
A covenant of metal, looped and sealed,
Whose rite has vanished with its faithful keepers.

Perhaps upon the Feast of Ordered Thought
The priestly caste assembled in white halls,
And each received one sacred clasp of wire,
The sign that all divided things were one;
Or else the monarch bore thee at his breast,
A token none but sovereign hands might touch.

We found thee not in solitude, but near
A thousand fragments marked by ink's faint ghosts,
Each pressed in ordered ranks beyond our ken.
What solemn liturgy these leaves proclaimed
We cannot know; yet thou alone remained,
Their final guardian against oblivion.

Some argue thou wert emblem of the sun,
Returning ever to itself again;
Others, the serpent folded into peace;
While bolder minds discern the cosmic path
By which the wheeling constellations bend
Around the unseen centre of all things.

And I, who brushed the dust from off thy face,
Can offer neither certainty nor proof.
I only know that one forgotten race
Esteemed thee worthy of enduring steel,
Whilst all their monuments dissolved away,
Leaving but thee to testify for them.

Sleep on, enigmatic curve of ancient hands.
Keep still the secret none may now reclaim.
For sometimes all that history preserves
Is not the glory kingdoms hoped to leave,
But one small thing, whose quiet, patient shape
Outlives the names of those who fashioned it.

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I only know that one forgotten race Esteemed thee worthy of enduring steel, Whilst all their monuments dissolved away, Leaving but thee to testify for them. For sometimes all that history preserves Is not the glory kingdoms hoped to leave, But one small thing, whose quiet, patient shape Outlives the names of those who fashioned it.

Tim, that is beautiful--all of it. But, as usual, I am left wondering several things, so, here I go again, asking questions. Coiled Dominion? The object, according to the comparison with the paperclip, is small, so obviously, no mummy inside. Was someone making joke? A message from outer space? in the future? "I only know that one forgotten race Esteemed thee worthy of enduring steel, Whilst all their monuments dissolved away, Leaving but thee to testify for them." So, proof of other beings on earth after us? And we're living in the past? wow! "What nameless artisan first bent thy form Into this twice-returning, silver hymn?" Twice returning??? If you'd rather remain mysterious, forget these questions. I enjoyed your lovely words, which may be more important than understanding their reference. :) Beautiful words in a mysterious message well - I just went back and read your comment under the title. So we left that for those in the future. I wonder what was in it?

edited 6/30/2026
Tim Margetts

6/30/2026

Thank you, Katharine. I always enjoy your questions because they show you're reading beneath the surface. 🙂 This was actually a slightly tongue-in-cheek parody of the archaeological programmes we so often see, where experts puzzle over objects whose purpose has been lost. There seems to be an unwritten rule that, if nobody can work out what something was for, it was probably ceremonial or ritualistic! So yes, this is set thousands of years in the future. The grandeur of humanity has long since crumbled into dust, and a new civilisation is excavating our world. Among all the ruins, they uncover... a humble paperclip. "Twice returning" refers simply to its shape, the wire folding back upon itself to create two concentric loops. If you have another look at the accompanying image, there's one more clue. The brass museum label beneath the object identifies it as: Object 47-B Culture: Unknown (Late Human Period) Ferrous Alloy Function: Undetermined The thought that amused me was that humanity might one day be reduced to a forgotten civilisation, and that all our cathedrals, spacecraft and monuments could vanish, while an ordinary paperclip survives to become a treasured museum piece whose purpose nobody can explain.

Heavenly days! From the beginning you were talking about the paperclip! All those descriptions, I totally missed the point. Well, Sir, I appreciate your tactfulness (to the Nth degree!!!). This is very clever and a great parody. I've got to start taking a brain supplement or something. As Rachelle would say, "OY!" Anyway, delightful post! Thanks for your patience, Tim, and very nice comments! Have you ever thought of writing a movie script and submitting it here in the US?