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Book Blitzed

Books...the only drug of my choice

MichaelaMarch 26, 202623 views
Book Blitzed

Crisp papers bundled between

cool, velvety covers--

a most intoxicating inky smell.

Its sultry mouth

beckons the innocent, the experienced, the infantile, and the wise.

To a storied past

or a fantasied future,

lulling all into ecstasies of magical imaginings–

visions of crafted hallucinations.

Oh, those lovely hallucinations

from endless choices:

sizzling crime, popping drama, screeching horror, panting thriller, pounding suspense!

All who partake of this stimulant,

all who inhale and exhale this high,

come out of its psychedelic dreams restored

but wanting.

And then the need for the next fix becomes sine qua non.*

*Sine qua non- an essential condition; a thing that is absolutely necessary

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The Words That Got to Me

“a most intoxicating inky smell (so close to new car perfection)” really stood out to me—that comparison was unexpected and instantly relatable. I also loved “Visions of crafted hallucinations.” That line carries a strong sense of imagination and pulls you into the experience of reading in a really vivid way.

Suggestions / Possible Tweaks

The imagery is really creative throughout and carries the piece. In a couple places, you might tighten the phrasing slightly just to keep that clarity consistent, but overall it works and feels intentional.

This reads like a love letter to books, and I liked the slightly playful tone mixed with that sense of addiction to reading. The way you described it as something you come out of “restored but wanting” felt especially true. Really enjoyable read.

Michaela

4/7/2026

Could you please give me one example of where I can "tighten the phrasing to keep clarity consistent". I would appreciate it so much.

Michaela

4/8/2026

I did some heavy editing on it. I hope it is tighter now.

The Words That Got to Me

I really enjoyed this. I loved the way you repeated hallucinations - going from 'crafted' to 'lovely' as if gradually realising the power the words have over you. 'All who inhale and exhale this high' was a marvellous line.

Suggestions / Possible Tweaks

For me, 'new car perfection' didn't land as I'm not a car person. The poem had an almost spiritual feel so maybe you could have chosen something more ethereal or something nature-based. However, maybe a new car is your absolute thing!

I've just attended two events at a literature festival in Oxford, UK and it was great to be among fellow readers. Your poem gave me the feel of a shared passion for the written word and where it can take us.

Michaela

4/8/2026

I agreed with you that the new car smell didn't fit the imagery in the rest of the poem. I rewrote that part and am much happier with it. Thanks for your suggestion!

You're welcome!

Tim Margetts

3/27/2026

The Words That Got to Me

I love the use of metaphor you use throughout this poem, Michaela. “a most intoxicating inky smell (so close to new car perfection).” I know these smells so well, and I agree on their intoxicating effect. This is very strong, and I love the way it shows books as there for all. “Its sultry mouth beckons the innocent, The experienced, the infantile, and the wise. To a storied past or a fantasied future” And what I consider your strongest line: “Visions of crafted hallucinations.” This is what a book is. I have always preferred the book to the movie because no CGI or special effect can recreate the cinema in my mind generated by a good book.

Suggestions / Possible Tweaks

I think a few tweaks and tightening could improve the poem overall. “Crisp papers bundled between Cool, velvety covers opens” Grammatically, it should be “open,” not “opens,” because the subject is papers/covers (plural). “ecstacies” is misspelt. It should be “ecstasies” “White crime, black drama, purple horror, green thriller, red suspense!” I found it a bit confusing. What is white crime? This caused me to stutter in my reading as I don't think of crime books by colour. Maybe something like “Dark crime, bright romance, Purple horror, green adventure, red-hot suspense!” might work better?

This is a clever poem full of metaphor, written by a poet who demonstrates a clear love for the written word. The vivid imagery lifts it, although at times it can drift a bit into cliché, it does maintain a strong thematic presence that took me into my own love of books and made me smile.

Michaela

4/8/2026

I did some re-writing on the parts you mentioned. I hope it reads better for you. I actually love my rewrite. So thank you so much for your suggestions.

Tim Margetts

4/8/2026

Much better, Michaela. So much more punch and highly visual.