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Birthday Party

Tim MargettsJune 25, 202626 views
Birthday Party

The first balloon burst
before everyone arrived.

Nobody admitted it.

One girl screamed.

Another
dropped their cup.

Orange juice
ran across the floor,

and half a dozen adults
performed an impromptu rescue
using napkins,
kitchen roll,
and somebody's sleeve.

Children's parties
begin with a schedule.

They end
with negotiations.

The timetable surrendered
almost immediately.

Musical chairs
became musical wandering.

Pass the Parcel
forgot whose turn it was.

The balloons,
never content
with simply floating,
became cudgels,
horses,
and improbable hats.

Someone hid beneath the table
guarding the crisps.

The loudest child
forgot to stop laughing.

The quiet ones
clapped just as hard.

Everyone got a prize,
whether they'd played or not.

Nobody cared
who came first.

The grown-ups
looked exhausted
before the candles
were even lit.

Not one of them
stopped smiling.

It was,
by every reasonable measure,

the perfect
birthday party.

The balloons
stayed up
for three days afterwards.

The nurses
handed us
a book of photographs.

We gave them chocolates.

They gave us memories.

We never returned.

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The Words That Got to Me

kitchen roll, * I love this UK term! Here, we refer to it as "paper towels." YAWN!! "Kitchen roll" is perky...though, at first, my mind went to things like "lobster roll" and "cinnamon roll," but I knew THAT context was wrong. (I'm not just pretty; I'm also SMART, don'tcha know...)

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dropped their cup. *I thought this was a clue about it being a trans birthday party or something. I guess I'm Old School, but this gave me pause, so I'm suggesting either "his," "her," or "a" cup since "another" is singular. and "their" is not.

Whoaaaaa. I certainly never saw THAT coming. And yet, it is so perfect. Mayhem and children's parties go hand-in-hand, and it matters not where, whose, or what other calamities are on the table. Deep eye-opening and wise, this puts everything into perspective. I love your knack for that every day. xoxo

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Tim Margetts

6/25/2026

I love it. "Kitchen roll" is one of those phrases I've never even questioned until now. 😄 As for "their cup", I think that's one we'll have to agree to disagree on. It was a deliberate choice to avoid giving the children any identifying features at all. I wanted the poem to fit every child rather than any specific child. I'm so pleased the ending landed for you, though. That's exactly what I was hoping it would do. Thank you, as always. xxx

I'm curious: is toilet tissue/paper "Bathroom roll?" And what happens is there's a spill in, say, the dining room?

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Tim Margetts

6/25/2026

Kitchen roll is a completely different animal from toilet paper. And just because it is called kitchen roll doesn't mean it can't be used wherever there is a spill that needs a quick hand to deal with.

The Words That Got to Me

The loudest child forgot to stop laughing. The quiet ones clapped just as hard. Everyone got a prize, whether they'd played or not. Nobody cared who came first.

Am assuming this is a party of mentally challenged children in a hospital? At least, that's what it sounds like to me. Sad . People trying to do the right thing. God bless 'em. You are a complex soul, Tim, but I keep trying. Am I anywhere close?

Tim Margetts

6/25/2026

Very close with this one, Katharine. The poem is seen largely through the eyes of the parents, with the final clue being the gift of the photo album. They were only left with the memories because they never came back. You're absolutely right about the hospital. Just move your thoughts from a general children's ward to a terminal one. Suddenly the children who don't join in, the quieter ones, and the fact that nobody cares who wins all take on a different meaning. As always, I love reading your thoughts because you always want to dig beneath the surface. 🙂

Thanks, Tim! That's because you always seem to have something lurking beneath it. :)

The Words That Got to Me

'half a dozen adults performed an impromptu rescue using napkins, kitchen roll, and somebody's sleeve' - Wonderful - I have run so many parties like that, at home and school! 'The nurses handed us a book of photographs. We gave them chocolates. They gave us memories.' A brilliant jolt to the brain here, Tim.

I loved the way you described this seemingly normal party and then brought us up short. It very much reminded me of a children's hospice environment. Well done for an emotionally powerful piece.

Tim Margetts

6/25/2026

Exactly where the party took place, Rachel. I am pleased it came over the way I intended.