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Five Steps

A little flash fiction for the season.

Tim MargettsOctober 1, 202624 views
Five Steps

No path led to it.

The woods weren’t deep, but they were quiet — the kind of quiet that gathers in the ribs and makes you breathe shallower. Josh had joked it was the perfect place to get murdered. Emma told him to shut up.

Then they saw the stairs.

Cut into the side of a slope, half-hidden by ferns and the creeping half-light of a dying day, the wooden steps looked as if they’d always been there. Five of them. Warped, water-stained, sunk into the hill like teeth. No railing. No platform. No destination.

“Creepy,” Josh grinned, already walking toward them. “Bet it’s part of some old cabin or—”

“Don’t go past the fourth,” Emma said, sudden and firm as he started to climb. She didn’t know why. The words just came.

Josh raised an eyebrow but didn’t stop. He planted one foot on the third step, then the fourth. He turned back to her, smirking. “See? Nothing…”

He moved to the fifth.

And vanished.

No sound. No flash. No stumble. One second there, the next... not.

Just five empty stairs and a wood far too quiet.

She ran to where he had been. His muddy heel mark on the third tread. No broken branches, no footprints on the slope behind. Just the stairs. Quiet. Waiting.

Emma gasped — choked — reached for her phone. “No signal.” Useless. Emergency calls failed. It might as well have been a stone in her hand.

She scrambled up the slope beside the steps, skidding on the pine needles, clambering for a better view — maybe he’d slipped down the far side? Maybe he was messing with her?

Nothing.

She ran in circles through the clearing, calling his name, circling back, heart battering itself against her ribs. The stairs remained exactly as they were. Indifferent.

Then — the phone again. Not for signal. For proof.

Her hands trembled as she opened the camera. She filmed the stairs. Zoomed in. “Josh disappeared,” she whispered, breathless and shaking. “He stepped here—” she panned down to the fifth step, “—and then he was gone. He was right there. I swear to God, he was right there.”

The camera shook as she circled back, filming her approach to the stairs. Her boots squelched in the mulch. She stood level with them now, still recording. “This is where it happened. I’m not making this up.”

And then — a slip.

Just a slip. Her heel caught on wet leaves. She stumbled forward, one hand flailing, one foot touching the fifth step.

The phone tumbled into the bracken.

The video kept recording for a few more seconds, staring at the empty staircase. Then static. Then nothing.

They found it weeks later. Battery dead. Screen cracked. No sign of Emma. No sign of Josh.

Just a muddy phone and a set of old worn-out stairs.

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The Words That Got to Me

“Don’t go past the fourth,” Emma said. Josh raised an eyebrow but didn’t stop Josh raised an eyebrow but didn’t stop He planted one foot on the third step, then the fourth. He turned back to her, smirking. “See? Nothing…” He moved to the fifth. And vanished.

well, you ole Phantasmagoriographer: Ha! That IS you, you understand. Maybe at least, now they are together somewhere, wherever that is. I think you delight in this kind of story. leaving us hanging. Oh well, now I know what you are. ha ha ha!

Tim Margetts

10/2/2026

Thank you, Katharine. 😂 “You old phantasmagoriographer” may well be my favourite description of me yet — once I worked out what the bloody word meant! And yes, I probably do enjoy leaving you all hanging far more than I should... Now, where did I put that rope.

The Words That Got to Me

Sunk into the hill like teeth. A great description. The phone tumbled into the bracken…old worn-out stairs. That whole last section was excellently done.

Ooh - what a mystery. I loved the open-ended feeling here - leaving us to ponder. Marvellous.

Tim Margetts

10/2/2026

Thank you, Rachel. I'm really glad the ending worked for you. I wanted to leave just enough there to make you wonder what happened without explaining it away. Sometimes the mystery is worse than the answer.

The Words That Got to Me

the creeping half-light of a dying day, *annnnnnnd so it starts.... sunk into the hill like teeth. *I'm already too invested (read: terrified) to stop reading...though my Little Voice tells me I really REALLY need to stop reading... She didn’t know why. The words just came. *Ahh, Women's Intuition... It might as well have been a stone in her hand. *So perfectly awesome!!! I LOVE THIS!!! heart battering itself against her ribs. *Ditto... into the bracken. *I've always loved that word!!!

You'd have been the biggest hit at Middle School girls' sleepovers, Tim! This is EXACTLY the kind of story that would make it impossible for us to sleep...and okay, maybe even STILL has this impact five decades later...NOT that I'm a sissy or anything... REALLY good story. So tight, no extra anything, but a brilliant and necessary use of every word that is here. You are the master of the macabre, whether in novella form, short story...or even flash fiction. So impressive. xoxo

Tim Margetts

10/4/2026

Thank you so much for your high praise. I am so glad you enjoyed this little gently spooky story. Thinking back to my teen years, I assure you my idea of how I could have been a hit at a teen girls' sleepover may not be the same as yours, LOL 😈

HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!! Okay, that's hilarious.