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The Noble Beast

Tim MargettsAugust 16, 202631 views
The Noble Beast

In fields of green, their shadows cast,

Majestic beasts, from ages past.

With muscle bound and mane aflow,

Through history's pages, their stories go.

 

Once kings of earth, in strength and might,

They turned the soil from morn till night.

With every plough and task they bore,

Man's burden less, their legend more.

 

These titans strong, with gentle eyes,

Beneath the sun, beneath the skies,

They shaped the world, laid foundations deep,

In their hoofprints, our progress leaps.

 

But as the gears of time did turn,

Man's ambition began to burn.

With engines roar and steel's embrace,

The horse's reign met a slower pace.

 

From fields of battle to peaceful plough,

Their numbers waned, but not their vow.

In silence stood, with head held high,

A fading echo, a whispered sigh.

 

Yet hope ignites in hearts so pure,

For those who seek, who still endure.

Through breeding's care and tender hand,

A chance to save this noble band.

 

Let's not forget their role, their grace,

Nor let the sands of time erase.

The power and beauty they bestow,

In heavy hooves, in sun and snow.

 

So here's to them, the heavy horse,

Their legacy, a natural force.

May we remember, honour their ways,

And in our hearts, they'll always graze.

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Once kings of earth, in strength and might, They turned the soil from morn till night. With every plough and task they bore, Man's burden less, their legend more. Very nice!

Tim, that is lovely! What is their role, today? Do they have one? Do they work on farms still? Maybe where they don't have the big machines? It looks like they should have some job with all that strength. Don't they help loggers? Anyway, you have certainly honored them with your poem. Are you, by any chance, a horse whisperer? :)

Tim Margetts

8/17/2026

Thank you, Katharine. I don't think they have much of a working role these days, sadly, although they can still sometimes be seen working in forestry— they can get to and drag out trees from places no machinery can easily reach— and similar places. There are also heavy horse centres and dedicated breeders keeping these magnificent animals from disappearing altogether. I have always had a great love for them. There is something quite extraordinary about standing beside an animal of such immense size and strength and finding it so wonderfully calm and gentle. Horse whisperer? Sadly not. Horse admirer? Most definitely. 😄

The Words That Got to Me

These titans strong, with gentle eyes, Yes, this is the beauty of them - they are such gentle beasts. Your poem summed up their noble characteristics well.

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Plow stood out but when I checked, I saw this is the US spelling.

I loved the gentle melancholy feel here, highlighting the beautiful relationship between man and horse ruined and forgotten due to man's greed. This brought back so many lovely memories - I went on a shire horse-drawn caravan holiday as a child and learnt several things - Shire horses are very heavy when they stand on your toes; they can canter at pace when food is waiting at the bottom of Bungay Hill; they are the most patient and wonderful of creatures. We used to have a Shire horse centre in Stratford-upon-Avon, site of many a happy visit, but sadly that closed many years ago. Such a shame that they are being consigned to history now.

Tim Margetts

8/17/2026

Rachel. I think you have exactly the sort of memories that inspired this poem. There really is something special about being in the presence of these enormous beasts. Compared with how flighty some riding horses can be, they seem so wonderfully calm, and their eyes, pools of brown and gentle as a summers breeze. Your caravan holiday sounds wonderful, although I think discovering the weight of a Shire horse by having one stand on your toes is probably a lesson you only need once! 😄 It is sad to see so many of the old heavy horse centres disappear, but thankfully there are still enthusiasts and breeders working hard to make sure the horses themselves don't follow them into history. As for my spelling slip, I wrote this some years ago and caught my error in the earlier verse when I was copying it into the site. Then missed the later one completely. I have edited it now. Thank you for catching it

Wow!! What a wonderful acknowledgement of the creatures who helped us create our history. I love how you made them majestic and worthy of our praise. They certainly are magnificent creatures! Lovely poem! xoxox

Tim Margetts

8/17/2026

I simply described them as they are. Indeed they are both gentle and majestic beasts, and our own history can be found written in their hoof-prints.

edited 8/17/2026