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Go on… I dare you

Tim MargettsAugust 14, 202617 views
Go on… I dare you

You’ve read the poem, reached the end,
you’ve met the foe, you’ve mourned the friend,
you’ve given ten whole minutes too —
so what’s another line or two?

Go on... I dare you.
Write a review.

No thesis needed, no PhD,
no deep critique of imagery,
no lengthy prose on what it meant —
just let them know ‘twas time well spent.

Go on... I dare you.
Write a review.

The viewing counter climbs with glee,
from twenty-two to twenty-three.
So someone’s been, that much’s true —
then fled before they could say boo.

Go on... I dare you.
Write a review.

Three thousand words, or maybe more,
have dripped from brain onto the floor.
The pages torn by endless scribble,
as stubborn words come at a dribble.

Go on... I dare you.
Write a review.

The hours that flee into the night,
words that scream with tortured fright,
a life that never sees the clock,
as fingers seize with writer’s block.

Go on... I dare you.
Write a review.

Now one can lose the will to live,
what should I write, what can I give?
A simple sentence, ‘Nicely done,’
might coax to life another one.

Go on... I dare you.
Write a bloody review.

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The viewing counter climbs with glee, from twenty-two to twenty-three. So someone’s been, that much’s true — then fled before they could say boo. and that's the truth! Go on... I dare you. Write a review.

Well, if you aren't the clever one!! BRAVO !!!!!! Wonderful verses and then the command in between each. Reminder, reminder, reminder. very good idea! And the picture you used - perfect! I have noticed, when looking at the names of members, the majority have written nothing, nor have they reviewed. That is not what this neat site is about. So, Good for you, nudging! again, Bravo!

PS, These members need encouragement to write, too.

Tim Margetts

8/14/2026

Thank you for your review, my friend. But then, you always do leave such good ones. I do hope more people start to take a more active part in the site. It has so much to offer; it just needs writers who want to share their own work and give their thoughts on others' posts. The greater the activity, the better for the site's growth.

thanks, Tim. You're right, and I'm sure Rachelle appreciates your neat effort!

Oh my! This should be the site mantra, I'm afraid! And I have no cliched leg to stand on, myself, when my reviewing has been slipshod at best. Okay: here's my new resolve: I will review on here every day from now on. Even if it's just two or three. I WILL REVIEW EVERY DAY. Otherwise, I'm not exactly setting much of an example as Chief Cook and Bottle Washer here! Thanks for the adorable-yet-effective "friendly reminder." You and Rachel and Katharine are the supporting beams for this CW house, and I appreciate your beautiful works very much. I need to SHOW that, not just TELL it! xoxox

Tim Margetts

8/16/2026

I know you read things 🙃😊 So, as I say in this, take an extra minute to say nicely done or that was a bag of doggy doodoo's 😎🤣

Yep. Message heard loud and clear. Thank you for making me better today. Ido(doo) honestly appreciate it. xoxo