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Worn out

The negative effects that caring can bring

Rachel GoslingJuly 10, 202631 views
Worn out

Beware, those who care,

exhaustion and despair

catch you unaware,

as life passes you by.

 

Fatigue flops down,

pinning you to the ground,

fixed smile turned to frown.

You struggle on and try.

 

Constant calls on your time

turn life into a climb.

Trudging through grime,

you’re questioning why.

 

Ears always tuned to hear

demands, short breath or fear.

Your own dreams disappear

and your hopes run dry.

 

Beware, the carer’s curse:

Depression, emptiness or worse.

When did you turn into a nurse?

When did your own happiness die?

 

 

 

 

 

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Tim Margetts

7/10/2026

This is a sincere poem that carries itself with the honesty of lived experience. The fourth stanza in particular stands out in the way it captures the constant state of watching and waiting for the next need to arise. The weight of it is, in itself, exhausting.

Yes. Just something I had to get out to feel better!

Tim Margetts

7/10/2026

Sometimes the cathartic nature of writing it down is, in itself, the release we need.

Absolutely.

The Words That Got to Me

When did you turn into a nurse? When did your own happiness die?

Suggestions / Possible Tweaks

just a small point that I have also been made aware of, myself: in the first line, the English guru says it should be "those who care."

Rachel, I can tell this is very personal. Your exhaustion comes through, and the reader feels your despair. I hope there is a chance of help from someone - to relieve you for a while. Your words, spare and poignant, convey a sad truth more prevalent today as people live longer. If you can arrange for some time off, your health will benefit from it. I don't mean to be a busy body. Best wishes to you.

Thank you. A more tricky week than normal. It was helpful to write it down and reset. Thanks for the grammar tip.

What is the name of this genre of poem, Rachel? I love the way the first three lines rhyme with each other, and the fourth ones in every stanza rhyme with each other. Very cool. Even in fatigue, you can make something beautiful. You are a true artiste. I'm sorry it was a hard week. I am sending you so much love. xoxo

Thanks my dear. A bit of a week - lots of emergency hospital dashes and trying times. Never mind - onwards and upwards again! No idea what this genre is! Just wrote it as I felt it.

Whoa. Your creative side fascinates me.