Remember me
Though age may veil the face you knew
Remember me
Beyond the marks of time you see
For I would still remember you
If time could touch the ageless, too
Remember me

Remember me
Though age may veil the face you knew
Remember me
Beyond the marks of time you see
For I would still remember you
If time could touch the ageless, too
Remember me
I read your story and found it really interesting. I felt the need to show my interest in this story because such a great story should not just remain without being converted into a comic. Without a doubt, even without the comic, the story is really good, but if it gets converted into a comic, it will attract a lot more people. btw I am a comic artist my work is to turn stories to comics and also do charcter art, cover art would you mind to checking out my work here is mt discord harper_clark and IG _harperr_ and gmail harperclark743@gmail com fell free to reach me here okay bye thanks for this amazing story
8/19/2026
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What a gorgeously done rondelet! It's tender and winsome and full of the poignant fear we all have of no longer being recognizable.