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My broken glass

The greenhouse, once so abundant, lay abandoned.

Rachel GoslingAugust 12, 202613 views
My broken glass

My broken glass

No longer shelters tender seeds

My broken glass

Accusations of neglect pass

When will you attend to my needs?

The plants perish as care recedes

My broken glass

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Wow. This is quite intense. Sad, evocative (why? what caused this?) and stark. Desolate, poignant and extremely well done rondolet!! If you HAD been eligible to enter this in the contest, you'd have easily won. This is absolutely excellent. xoxo

Thank you! I’d actually forgotten I wasn’t eligible. Duh!