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Burr...

EchoSeptember 19, 202624 views
Burr...

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Prologue

Winter

Outside wind brought gusts of snow

Hushed by a cold lazy scrim

Chilling

Peaceful

We snuggled in with winter calm

kindling flame beneath dry wood

Brought warmth

Warm feet

Back in bed 'neath flannel sheets

Books and books. and books to read

Oh Yes!

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We snuggled in with winter calm kindling flame beneath dry wood A lovely, cosy image.

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Books and books. and books to read should probably be: Books and books and books to read.

Scrim was a new word for me - I take it you meant some kind of covering? I liked the theme of winter and snugging inside here.