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This Easter Morn

Free Verse along a North Carolina woodland path

Diane Kenel-TrueloveApril 3, 202616 views
This Easter Morn
I am no stranger to God.

I have seen His handiwork
in the grandeur of a
blazing northern Michigan sunset,
and the gentle grasp of
my newborn babe.

I have felt the might
of His surging power
on a windswept New Hampshire mountainside
as tumultuous clouds gathered, 
as well as along a desolate Ohio roadway
caught in the grips of a late
spring blizzard of ice, wind, and fear.

I have experienced His healing powers
when He has restored
the lives and spirits
of his warring and sick children,
and allowed one more day
to dawn upon a world
seemingly devoid
of His memory.

And I have cursed and defiled His name
when a loved one's pain and sorrow
have become too much to bear,
and I am without answers
to soothe a wounded and
tormented heart. 

I am no stranger to God. 

He will not go away. 
He will not let go of me. 

I cannot shake Him loose. 

When I least expect it,
He makes His presence known. 

So it is only fitting
that on this Easter morn
I should hear His voice once again
along this quiet and tranquil North Carolina trail, 
surrounded by a cathedral of 
glorious white flowering dogwood
blooming at the forest's edge.

Their beauty is breathtaking.
Their abundance is overwhelming.
Their serenity is captivating.

Reverently they lift their billowing cloud-like branches
and pay homage to their Creator. 

I hear their joyous refrain,
and I bow my head
in silenced awe,
praise, and humility. 

I am no stranger to God.

He has felt my wrath.
He has experienced my despair.
He has heard my rage. 

Countless times I have spurned Him 
and lost sight of Him along the way.

But He refuses to lose me.
 
Beside this unsuspecting peaceful pathway,
enveloped by an ethereal chapel of majestic
white flowering dogwood,
He bids me welcome.

Without hesitation, 
I accept.

I am no stranger to God,
nor is He to me,
on this splendid 
and hope-filled
Easter morn.

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I am no stranger to God *Whoa! Come right in and knock our socks off by setting the No Nonsense tone. surrounded by a cathedral of glorious white flowering dogwood *absolutely glorious in its descriptive metaphor Reverently they lift their billowing cloud-like branches and pay homage to their Creator. *Even the plants have a spirituality to share. What a gorgeous interpretation! Countless times I have spurned Him and lost sight of Him along the way. *So relatable and honest; I love this because it keeps this real versus a glut of Goody-Two-Shoes ideas. The timing of it is also absolutely perfect.

Whoa. This is luminous. It is No Nonsense in its approach to admitting to all the aspects the narrator's relationship with The Almighty: good, bad and everything in between. I appreciate the candor and the lack of apology for the realness of the relationship. It's bare and raw, all the curtains drawn back...and so extremely appealing in its honesty. Exceptional job. I'm going to say it again: I HAVE MISSED YOUR WORK SO VERY MUCH!!! Reading today's two poems has lifted me way, WAY up. Thank you for sharing your supreme talent here. xoxoxo

The Words That Got to Me

I thought there were some striking lines here, particularly the repeated, ‘I am no stranger to God’, ‘gentle grasp of my newborn babe’, ‘cathedral’ and ‘chapel’ when describing the flowers and natural beauty surrounding you. Those spiritual moments felt so powerful and profound.

Suggestions / Possible Tweaks

‘Unsuspecting’ peaceful pathway felt a little out of key here. Seemingly unremarkable perhaps?

I thought this a heartfelt and quietly powerful faith poem. I could envisage the scene and your sense of awe and renewed faith here.